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Roseyfox
06-19-2015, 04:05 PM
As the rain pound the ground, I look beyond my feet. The bullet shells laying before me. No time to stop. My heart ever pounding.

Up on my feet. Marching forward not a word. Then here and there shouting from everywhere as i see blood splatter the ground beside me. The deafening sound of tank's firing away. The war it here.

Blood mist and sand feeling the air. The smell of gasoline burning at me. Why can't we just cease. But that not for me to think.

I will not die. I will survive. Dodging mosquito shells. Barely escaping the Eagles. Hiding from the polar bear blows and trying to get away from the mabas shots.

I will fight, I will not die. I am Rosey and I stand for my family till my end time. Bring the pain cause I'm not going today. No matter how bad the blood stains. I will not perish.

D3vil5ro53
06-19-2015, 05:13 PM
Best i have read! Thx

Roseyfox
06-19-2015, 10:42 PM
Aww thank you so muchs.

Zach
06-20-2015, 01:02 AM
I agree. That is the best one I've read so far. Great job Rosey!

Aeriel Raice
06-22-2015, 05:20 PM
Wow! That's really well written, you can almost feel the upcoming battle by yourself.
Any chance you'll write another one? :)